Causing a commotion, cause they are so awesome. Haha, really addicting
It's funny how catface made an "experimental" snowcat that flew away. Reminded me of the boy in the balloon. Haha xD
I loved the harmonies of the pads... very soothing on a stressful day :)
Percussion is rhythmic yet simple, nothing too complex. Maybe create a more complex and dynamic percussion section on you next submission?
Overall: Everything sounded harmonic and great. Loved the Pads and Piano. Percussion was simple, but dance-able. 5/5 & 9/10
Thanks for the review, i'll look at making more complex percussion in future :)
Constant rising action.
Intro was good. Good enough to catch my interest. After 2:04 mins in, its starting to get repetitive. May I suggest you put in a breakdown at 2:30-2:45 mins? Maybe a quiet classical piano piece, or maybe a soft trance pluck to break the monotony. Something to break the repetitive rhythm. Effects and technique used were average-above average. Look up on some tutorials for breakdowns and transitions, it will help :)
I'll be checking up on your progress! I'm willing to see new submissions from you.
Overall: potentially good. Overuse of rhythm and lack of variety made it a 7/10.
yeah, i honestly made this like a year ago... but since I have been kinda stuck lately I started to upload all my older music... I have a few songs I am working on at the moment so maybe some new uploads soon! :P
- but seriously thanks for the detailed review... I like your idea of a breakdown :)
Simply Epic. So much effort put into one song, and I can honestly say that it's a very inspirational and sentimental piece. It's sad to see songs like these go unnoticed, and I know it can be disheartening to see your creation get "swept under the rug."
Go forth and continue on with your submissions and creations! You have made a new fan! :D
5/5 and 10/10
downloaded and Fave'd
Thanks for the review P0larus.
Yeah many songs that deserve more go unnoticed on newgrounds =(.
If you really want to break trough you have to submit a song every 3 weeks atleast to keep people checking for updates.
Yet I can't make a song like this in 3 weeks (rather 3 months).
So yeah =( its a burden, but unfortunately not easily avoided.
A new fan hellyeah =D
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